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F/Finland. Art blog. I draw a webcomic and lurk in a fandom or two!
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Feb 7 '16

Buhhh I’m not so satisfied with Mystery Man’s monologue bits. I already rewrote them several times but still feels like it doesn’t get the point across as smoothly as I’d hoped. Might go back and polish a little, I dunno

Basically it’s this roundabout way of establishing that Jon used to be a classic tough guy trope who thinks he’s good enough on his own but eventually learns the benefits of having friends. Adorable right? I hope you guys got any of that???

18 notes Tags: phantomland updates
  1. annalandin answered: Yeah, I got it! <3 I think you pulled it off well - don’t think Joh would have taken well to a more sentimental speak. This was just right!
  2. dirigiblefish answered: I think it was pretty clear in those last few pages! o:
  3. ivycube answered: Yes, it’s clear and smooth. Don’t worry. :)
  4. meredithmoriarty answered: Yep! Comes through loud and clear. :)
  5. blufeniix answered: 100% got it, and sUPER STOKED TO SEE JON GET RESCUED BY THE SQUAD
  6. drygrasses answered: I definitely got that! and I really love Mystery Man, A++ design
  7. ered-jaeger answered: I got that o//
  8. lazysmirk answered: It’s pretty clear.
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